Just to focus on design rather than content for a minute:

1. NEVER EVER use Chancery font for quotes or for anything. It reminds me of the early days of desktop publishing when people went crazy mixing all kinds of ugly fonts together on the same page. (see slide 4). This font has no place in any sophisticated presentation. Just italicize what you are already using.

2. WHERE ARE THE NUMBERS? All the graphs have had a gray rectangle placed over the X and Y axis values. Either Suresh just wants to reveal those values himself during his presentation (and these rectangles may animate away from the page for that reveal) or he wants just to emphasize the graph lines in isolation from whatever values they represent.

Whoever put these there did it very sloppily. First, there's a gray gradient in the background and putting a flat gray box over it means you are calling attention to the fact there's a box there. Second, on a computer screen you can actually use a text cursor to select the hidden text and then copy/paste it to discover the hidden values.

Also look at the pie charts around the data center pages and see the floating commas next to each of the names, followed by a gray box to hide the value represented by the pie wedge. Very sloppy.

I guess the engineers in the audience won't care, but to me it looks very rushed.

/designrant