What stood out for me:
Too much about platinum and palladium in relation to copper which is mentioned numerically as a Grade!
"small Company"? was a comment early on in the description. Why, feeling small next to Cliffs? Should have been largest land holder in the Ring (that occurs much later and loses effect by then).
'in a swamp' Arrrgh, Not Again!
Wes is being honest to a fault. He was not on a withness stand in a legal court. He needs to put on a salesman's hat. ( Sir Richard we need you!)
Otherwise a fair presentation.