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Re: Who's worse...

posted on Apr 19, 2007 08:02AM

You wrote:

"I sit on corporate boards. And I can assure you. However, your letter is formed. It will be seen in a negative state. And again I say, if the media gets hold of it. It will have a very negative affect."

For someone as elevated as you, sitting on corportate boards and such, I would think proper sentence structure and punctuation would be second nature. You have 3 sentences that are not complete sentences in that paragraph.

Just some constructive criticism; I hope it is taken as such.

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